MortalSymphony's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[*- Solara(Full Version) -]

Breathtaking.

The guy below who says the bass is a bit repetative and the bass drum is weak is crazy. This song is perfect as it is; doesn't get too repetative, it's nice and long but with lot's of content, amazing transitions. The list goes on.

I'm stunned at how well this is put together, keep up the fabulous work.

Jebbal responds:

I wouldn't say he's crazy, its just an opinion! lol For someone who doesn't like repetitiveness, this song sure is chock-full of it! I'm glad you liked it though.

Thanks for the review!

[Edge of Faith]

You cheated!

You can't have an opening and closing hi-hat with double bass at the same time!
What is this blasphemy?

But really, great work.

NemesisTheory responds:

I always cheat! i can't play fair XD lol

Thanks. ;D

[-586rick- amazing remastered]

Could be better.

It's a great start, really cool, but it needs more sounds in it (as I would call it), especially some real drums, and it needs to be longer but at the same time less repetative. The synths are good so some more variation would make it great.

586rick responds:

I see I can try that Thanks for the review.

[DJ Comet-Extreme Sit. Redux]

Here's how it could have been better.

First off, way too repetative. This should be about two minutes maximum.

The real problem is that the riff switches between being cool then being stupid. The first 6 seconds are cool, but every part of the main riff after that just doesn't go with it. The drums and bass and all the random effects are pretty cool, but since the main line sucks the song just gets ruined. (Especially the part around 00:42, really really bad) The small break around 1:00 is fine and the one around 3:25 is too.

I recomend that you make some new variations in the riff, but show it to some friends first to make sure that people will like it. (and I do realize that I may be the only one who thinks this) Just make 30 seconds of riff, switch to a break, more riff, break, then riff and end it. something like that, just make it alot shorter. (I don't know if break is the right word but whatever) Anyway, it has alot of potential but turned out worse than it could have been.

TheComet responds:

Bingo, the review I've been looking for :D

A big issue I had with the guitar was that it actually only gave me the right kind of sound on only a few notes, so I was forced into working with just one key. Slayer tends to do that, even if it's a homemade instrument *shrug*

While I doubt I'll do another remix of this song, I'll definately check those segments you mentioned and see what I can do to do it better next time around

thanks for the review, it really helps me out in the long run!

[Genome]

Some pretty damn fine work.

This song is really cool. Although it is rather short, and it doesn't loop well, the 2 minutes is just amazing. Great work.

Dj-Wraith responds:

thx, glad you liked it, the reason it's not looping well is because this ver. is rendered to mp3 instead of wave. I have it exported to .wav on my HD as well, but the filesize was too big for the upload =/

- Wraith

[Couldnt Think of a Name]

You have to name this!

This song is amazing! It deserves #1 in DnB. Only suggestion is to make the drums a bit louder. Great work.

Sylacone responds:

The entire song is drums... if I made the drums louder, the entire song would be louder. just for future refrence

[Obsolete (Loop)]

It seems incomplete.

It could use a nice bass line. The drums are way too simple. The main synth doesnt't change up enough. Would be cool if you had all that. This sounds like you made it in about 5 minutes. Complete this, and make it into a full song, and it would be much better.

shadow715 responds:

Agreed, 10 minutes. Actually. There is a bass synth..that matches the bass drum..nothing spectactular. Thanks for the input. But, I fail to see how a 7 on clarity works, tho. This is pretty clear....